Describing your CharactersDescribing your CharactersAs writers, one of our primary goals is to bring characters to life in the readers’ imaginations. To do this, a character needs two things:1) A personality.2) A physical appearance the reader can imagine.The first is created through characterization, and the second is said to be done through physical description. While both statements are true, what I’d like to discuss is how physical description needs to do more than just craft appearance, and more than anything, it's characterization that contributes to vividly imagined characters.Character Description:Take a look at the following example.1) When I entered Mr. Smith's office, he stood and smiled at me. He had a big nose, brown eyes, and short, brown hair. He wore a dark suit. I shook his hand. What do you know about Mr. Smith from this brief scene? The physical details I’ve given say that he has a big nose, brown eyes, and short, brown hair.
JealousyI forgot how jealousylooked on you -a brooch of many colorspinned to her dressjust above the breasts,or a thin bright ribbontrailing off a straw hat.and how it smelled -too much perfume in atiny space orlemons bursting off the branchesto bloom at her feet.and how it soundedlike too much musicfor one room to hold,so it had to be sharedwith a strangerwho wore candlelightbeautifully.I forgothow it sat on your tongue -a sharp insectshedding its wings,and leaving meto dream of her.